MY
Amazing Holiday – By Frankie Luga
In the holidays I went to the beach and I went with my
family too. After that, we went to new
world and I brought some fish and some coffee.
I got drowned and help and then uncle and I went back home and I went to
sleep.
Well done Frankie for writing an excellent story. I liked the part when you went to New world to buy some shopping.
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Good work Frankie, I am proud of you for writing a neat story about the park and the beach. Keep up the great work!From Revival Room 3
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