Sunday 14 February 2016

Story by Frankie Luga

MY Amazing Holiday – By Frankie Luga

In the holidays I went to the beach and I went with my family too.  After that, we went to new world and I brought some fish and some coffee.  I got drowned and help and then uncle and I went back home and I went to sleep.


2 comments:

  1. Well done Frankie for writing an excellent story. I liked the part when you went to New world to buy some shopping.
    From Jasmin Room 3

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  2. Good work Frankie, I am proud of you for writing a neat story about the park and the beach. Keep up the great work!From Revival Room 3

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